Dear Sammy,
I know that you were taken by a bus away from your family. You must have struggled without your sister. In my opinion, I think the bus should of made sure that there were no more kids on campus. How many times did you and your sister get caught in a destruction?
Sincerely,
Gabby
I liked how you asked the main character’s brother a question that is part of the book but you forgot to put a apostrophe in the tittle “main character’s…”